We have been doing writing this week. The topic is Unseen Depths. This is what I’ve worte so far…
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Beneath the rough and tumble of waves, in the heart of the ocean I swam, gliding gently through the water. As I turned to my right I could see glimpses of lights ahead. I swam closer, and realised that they were shiny diamonds. Soon I could see that there were coral gardens and coral houses as well. Little fish started coming out from all the houses, talking in different languages I was sure I wasn’t familiar with. I kept on swimming through the town taking in everything I saw. As I swam out of the little town – which was more like a village – I came to a clearing. I stood staring at it, not sure what it was or if I should go inside.
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As I stood wondering, I saw a glimpse in the “thing”. My curiosity took over me, and I swam inside. As I swam I realised that this “thing,” was a ship. A ship that had been underneath the sea for what looked like centuries. The ship had turned into a tumble of rotten pieces of wood, with bits of seaweed and coral wrapped around the rotten wood planks. I kept on swimming through what was left of the ship. As I turned a corner I saw more glimpses. I swam through the rough and tumble of the ship for hours. When I was just about to go back to the town, I saw glimpses again. I followed the glimpses of light and soon found a portal.
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