This week we did a new kind of writing called snowball writing. We had a time limit of 12 minutes to write as much as we could for the start, then once everyone had scrunched up their peice of paper (that they had been writing their starting on), we threw them to the end of the classroom. Next we picked up a random scrunched up peice of paper, unscrunched it, read and started writing the middle part of the story. We did the same thing again, until we had written the end of another story. We soon found out what our own story sounded like once we had all finished writing the 1st, 2nd and 3rd peices of others storys. This is what my story was…
“What are we doing?” Meia asked in a timid voice.
“We are going to swim in that lake that I pointed out on the way here,” Indi answered confidently.
“Why are we going there? We are meant to be over with the rest of the group. I was excited for that activity because it was ziplining,” Sophie said, a bit annoyed.
It was a sunny day at Woodend Camp in Christchurch, where the year 5 and 6’s were camping for 5 days. 4 friends called Indi, Sophie, Meia and Tara were walking down to the lake.
Indi was a bit naughty sometimes and was being naughty today by leading them to the lake.
It was a beautiful lake and it was a very hot day. Splash! They jumped in.
“Ahhh! I;m getting sucked down!” All of the 4 girls yelled.
Everything went black.
The 4 girls were sucked to the bottom of the lake. They found a hallway. There were vines growing up the walls. They walked down the hallway and found a door.
Indi opened it and saw a weird man. He was making a type of potion. He looked like a scientist. The 4 girls walked up to him. Indi tapped his shoulder and the man turned around and said,
“I was expecting you 4 girls, but especially you, Indi.”
Indi said, “What’s that supposed to mean?”
The imposter replied, “I’m good. I will give you each a potion that will make you float back up to the surface, safely.”

What would the start of your story be?
What would happen?